October 21, 2026

#TBRChallenge 2026: Bad Date

The Book: Bad Date by Ellery Lloyd

The Particulars: Thriller short story (58 pages), Amazon Original Stories, 2025, Digital Only

Why Was It In Wendy's TBR?: I subscribe to Amazon Prime, which means I can take part in Amazon's monthly First Reads program. Sometimes a bonus short story is included, of which this was one back in August 2025. 

The Review: So, it finally happened. After six years, which included the height of the pandemic when I was regularly still reporting to the office, I finally caught COVID. I have no experience but from what I can gather it's largely been a mild case. Spiked a fever at one point, but things seem isolated to general fatigue and feeling like I have a very bad sinus cold / virus. But this development, on top of the fact that I'm in the reading slump from hell, has meant I was fully expecting to miss my own TBR Challenge deadline - which just looks bad for the hostess even though I always tell everyone that this Challenge is meant to be "low stress."  Well folks, that's why Baby Jesus invented short stories and novellas. So I went diving into my Kindle app and dug up this short story (58 pages!) that fit this month's The Hunt theme perfectly.  The official blurb is as follows:

Fay Roper is a divorced single mom and a globally famous actress. She’s also unlucky in love. Maybe because the last thing Fay wants in a man is yet another superfan. But somehow, every time she has a boyfriend who isn’t a stalker, he abruptly disappears from her life. With the help of her best friend and right-hand woman, Poppy, Fay decides to change the game and join an exclusive new dating app under a false identity. A subscriber named Oliver takes the bait. But Oliver likes to play games too. And only one of them can win.

What the blurb leaves out? Fay's acting career is well past skidding into a ravine. Looking to make over her former child-star image she took on more "serious" roles, which were not kindly received. Her first marriage, to an older and abusive fading action star, ended in divorce and she got sole custody of their son Wolf. Through it all is Poppy, her BFF and personal assistant who is helping her navigate the dating app waters which they are using for fodder for their podcast series (because, of course). But it soon becomes clear that there's more here than meets the eye. Fay and Poppy have ulterior motives, as does her latest "match" Oliver. The question is, which hunter will come out on top?

The way the authors (this is a husband and wife team) lay out the story is rather clever. As the reader you immediately know not to take anything at face value and the authors keep you on the line by dropping little juicy breadcrumbs to reveal more behind everyone's various motives. The problem? None of these people are terribly likeable. Poppy the personal assistant is probably as close as we get, but even she's sticking her head in the sand about a lot. Ultimately the character we're expecting to get their comeuppance gets it, but there's still a rather disconcerting realization that while that "bad person" is dealt with, another character who has committed MULTIPLE MURDERS is just allowed to have that all swept under the rug. It's the stuff horror movies are made of y'all - truly. 

So where does this leave me? Not terribly satisfied but there's enough juice in the writing of this short story that I wouldn't necessarily be opposed to trying a full-length suspense novel by these authors. That said, I'd walk into that experience likely a bit leery that the promise of a fully righted universe might not be forthcoming.

Final Grade = C-

6 comments:

  1. I'm making wild guesses about who's killing those 'not that bad' boyfriends, and...yeah. Not sure I'd want to spend time with any of the characters.

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    1. AL: I'm torn between saying it needed more pages and not wanting more pages because everybody is pretty terrible.

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  2. Sorry that even your short story failed you! :( Also YUCK on the Covid.

    My choice this month was "The Love-Shy Lord" by Mona Prevel. It's a late (published) trad Regency from 2003, and it definitely feels like the tail end of the subgenre. It was fine - not awful, not amazing. The unevenly paced plot was the biggest hindrance. I have another title by this author on Mount TBR that I will read, but I'm not exactly rushing out for the rest of her tiny backlist.

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    1. Eurohackie: Ugh, the dreaded "it was OK, I guess...." read. Books like that are always the worst for me because they fail to inspire passion either way. I didn't love it but I also didn't hate it - which means I'm denied the catharsis of word vomiting my dislike all over my blog 😂

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  3. Bummer this one didn't hit the mark! My pick for this month wasn't what I originally planned to read, but life happens. Sorry my previous message wasn't what I meant to say. I'm not having a great October.

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    1. Angela: No worries, I deleted the other comment. I had to turn on comment moderation due to the amount of spam I get, which seems to come in waves. I get hit for a while, until they realize comment moderation is on, and then they slink away for a few months, only to attempt again.

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